The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

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contemporary era,many countries have detrimentally confronted

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of repercussions owing to the juvenile crimes.

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who are living without bestowing love

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affection and

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also

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perfect

guidance

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may easily go astray and

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,in turn, the juvenile felony count has drastically

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worldwide.

Lack

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of parental

supervision

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,

malfunction

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and malfunction

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of

nuclear

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the nuclear

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family may usher to become easy prey of incompatible

company

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companies

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and commit teen crimes.

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by

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maintaining healthy family

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institution

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, paying careful

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by

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parents

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and

teachers

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and establishing new career opportunities, are capable of

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the

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youth

crime

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tendencies.

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essay will explain the prime causes for

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juvenile

crime

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rate and pragmatic solutions that can be taken for them with my logical conclusion. There are two prominent causes for the growing

of

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juvenile

crime

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rate.

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are

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lack

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of parental

supervision

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and debilitated family

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institution

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institutions

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.

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, the prime root of youth

crime

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is

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lack

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the lack

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of parental

supervision

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. Unless

parents

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pay

attention

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to their

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offsprings

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, they are more likely to engage easy prey of bad company and commit unethical habits.

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example

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due to

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the

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parents

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parent's

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hectic

lifestyle

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they have missed their

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offsprings

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offspring

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, and

deprive

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parental

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of parental

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love and

attention

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for the

children

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.

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teenagers are inclined to indulge in bad habits

such

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as smoking and drinking, shoplifting, venturing

to

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into

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illegal substances ,

criminal

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and criminal

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behaviours .

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deblitating

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debilitating

and breaking down of nuclear family

bond

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bonds

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may contribute to

the

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apply

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teenage

crime

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. It may detrimentally affect

to

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apply

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the

children

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's emotional security. owing to the

lack

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of

attention

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,

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offsprings

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offspring

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are more likely to be vulnerable and engage

with

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in

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bad associations.

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it is obvious that

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offsprings

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offspring

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who are from unhealthy family

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institution

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institutions

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more prone to

do

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engage in

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criminal activity than

children

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of strong family

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institution

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institutions

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. Not only the

parents

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but

also

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teachers

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and

government

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the government

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have

responsibility

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a responsibility

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to play

major

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a major

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role

to prevent

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in preventing

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from

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such

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criminal

activities

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. Mainly, despite living hectic

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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,

Parents

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have

great

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answerable that maintain

healthy

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a healthy

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nuclear family

institution

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. To be more precise,

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there is

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one parent, can be obtained help from grandparents to heed their

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offsprings

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offspring

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.

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on

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the other hand

teachers

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also

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have

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a major

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responsibility to observe

children

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in the school.

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for

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example,

Teachers

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can engage with

children

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and give

guidance

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while

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school

activities

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and after school hours.

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of

this

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there is less likely to chance of

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with other parties.

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,the government have

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to create

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a supportive

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environment by establishing new career opportunities and implementing stringent policies, to deter teenage criminal behaviours.

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,by catering emotional support and better

guidance

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can be eradicated juvenile vulnerable

activities

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.

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, owing to

deprivation

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the deprivation

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of parental and adult

supervision

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,

the

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apply

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teenagers are likely to venture

bad

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into bad

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habits.

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felony count has

unbelievably

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ameliorated. The most crucial predicaments are heedless of

offsprings

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and malfunctioning of family

bond

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bonds

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.

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by establishing healthy,strong family

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institution

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institutions

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and bestowing perfect

guidance

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can curtail

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crime

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rates.If the

parents

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and

teachers

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provide physical,

emotional

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and emotional

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support and closely monitor the

activities

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of their

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offsprings

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offspring

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they will no longer tend to vulnerable

activities

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. Ishanthi Isha..Sri Lanka.