The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph below indicates how many males and females used
cell
phones in the city of Marysville between 1995 and 2015. The number of cell
phone users
has changed significantly during these years among men and women.
Overall
, both males and females became cell
phone subscribers in 1995 with popularity among 500 people. The number of users
rose rapidly in a decade till subscribing cell
phones reached 2,500 persons between both men and women in 2005.
Following
this
, the number of male subscribers remained steady during 2005 and the next five years, before it increased to more than 2,500 users
in 2015. Whereas
, after female subscribers gradually decreased in 2010 with a drop to less than 2,500 persons, it constantly reached more than 2000 users
in 2015.Submitted by nikimohamadi72 on
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