The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph below indicates how many males and females used
cell
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phones in the city of Marysville between 1995 and 2015. The number of
cell
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phone
users
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has changed significantly during these years among men and women.
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, both males and females became
cell
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phone subscribers in 1995 with popularity among 500 people. The number of
users
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rose rapidly in a decade till subscribing
cell
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phones reached 2,500 persons between both men and women in 2005.
Following
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this
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, the number of male subscribers remained steady during 2005 and the next five years, before it increased to more than 2,500
users
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in 2015.
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, after female subscribers gradually decreased in 2010 with a drop to less than 2,500 persons, it constantly reached more than 2000
users
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in 2015.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cell, users with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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