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from the basic selecting criteria for most large companies.However,some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other methods.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days most companies do an
interview
 to choose employment. So, some
people
 think that companies should not conduct an
interview
 because there are other ways to test
people
's capabilities.
This
 essay will discuss the question and will draw my personal conclusion. On the one hand, the
interview
 is one of the most popular and the most chosen ways to know a person face to face. But
also
 it is not always fair.
For example
, some
people
 get nervous and do not do well
although
 they are a great choice for the job. So, that's why some think that a meeting is not the best way.
On the other hand
, there are many ways to meet the applicants without doing a conference.
For example
, an online
interview
 is much easier than a meeting account
face-to-faceface
Correct your spelling
face-to-face
.
For instance
, the application that lives in another country,
instead
 of flying too many hours and taking so much time, they can just open their laptops or any other devices. In conclusion, after a careful analysis of the point of view, in my opinion, the consultation is not my favourite way to introduce myself in a job examination and I think there is more than one way to introduce
people
 themselves.
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