Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? It is a positive or negative development?

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receiving

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a lot of

money

that

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government

workers.

In

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this

essay will discuss the pros and the cons.

On the other hand

,

celebrities

receive more

money

due to

the fact that they are so popular and they have a lot of fans out there.

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of the reasons

also

that these famous people are very costly when performing in the film theatre or

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any part in the community services. Not only that

however

they

been

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and

practise

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plenty

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for many

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hours or years to become

a

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celebrrities

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celebrities

.

Further

than that they receive more

money

on the account of they are the embassy of their country plus they are

also

carrying the name of their country wherever they go and that why they gain more

money

that

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than

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government

politicians.

However

, it is a negative development on the other side why?

this

will

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can cause

the

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bankrupt

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because the

government

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happy

to

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famous people to earn more

money

. Another effect

will occur

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is that most of the

politicans

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politicians

political

workers will definitely resign from their

job

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jobs

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due to

the low income.

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good example is that

politians

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politicians

and

celebrities

are human

being

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. The question here

why

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is why

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the other will

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be diffirent

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diffirent

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different

from the other

one

?

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.

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The answer is that they both have

family

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families

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and work

as

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for

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same

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the same

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purpose as to provide bread on the table.

This

practise

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practice

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shows that the more earn less

to

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apply

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politicians will suffer their families and friends not only that

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however

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it will not

makes

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everyone in the

government

position happy. In conclusion,

celebrities

are earning more because they are

proffesional

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professional

and

this

is

one

of

their

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the

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job

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jobs

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that they do throughout their life

besides

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they are the embassy of the country and that

essential

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to the citizens

thus

,

politians

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politicians

will get less income and

that is

not fair between them. In my opinion, I believe that if the

government

enforce

to

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levelise the salary with the

celebrities

then

it will help the citizen to support their families and the communities.