You live near a record shop that sells music, movies, and books. Write a letter to the shop asking if they have a few different items you are looking for. – Ask what the prices are and if they can be orders – Ask when they would arrive and if you can have them held in advance

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I Jassie Malhotra live on the same street

at the end

of the street around the corner as your shop. I have been a frequent buyer of your shop. The books and magazines you are buying never fail to entertain me. I have been thinking of asking you if you have the latest series of Avengers and the old edition of Star Wars movies starring Wil Wilton. I am a huge fan of Marvel. I would

also

want a book by Carol Matthews titled " you driving me crazy".I have been looking for

this

content everywhere and hoping that you would have it as your collection is remarkable . If you have them can you please tell me what it could cost me including shipping? And how long it will take to arrive. I would be more than happy if you consider my request. I hope you will look at my request favourably. Yours sincerely Jassie Malhotra

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