Some university students want to learn about other Subjects in addition to their main subjects.Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some college
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different
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think that,
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one
subject
is learning better than the differnt
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different
subjects
, because Students
can Specialize in one
field
.I will discuss both views and I give my opinion.
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a university
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one
main subject
. Then
some students
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with core subjects
. Furthermore
, University Students
have a lot of knowledge. Therefore
Some students
are multi
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. They Can got
more experience and knowledge about Change the verb form
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and future career feild
.
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fields
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think that,
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students
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kinds
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but they do not have completed it subjects
.Therefore
some students
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students
are selecting one
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the medical
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