the bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.

the bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.
The display bar charts
gives
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data on road transport in a number of European countries. It describes 7 countries they are
Denmark
, France, Italy, United Kingdom, Germany, Spain,
EU
average and kilometres per year as well miture per day. Kilometres per year
travel
per
person
by car the highest is in
Denmark
with more than 12000 and
EU
is average with 10000.
Travel
per
person
by bus, train, metro
as well
as
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bike is the highest
is
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in
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Denmark
with 3000 and
EU
is average with around 1000. Minutes per day, commuting time with all modes as well both ways the highest
is
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in
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the United Kingdom with 45 and the average is
EU
with 30.
Denmark
is the highest
compare
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to other countries.
To conclude
, the information describes
about
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travel
per
person
by car,
travel
per
person
by bus, train, metro and bike and commuting time by all modes and both ways.
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