Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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problem
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of our time. Some
people
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say that the main environmental
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of airtime is the moss of particular species of
plants
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and
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others believe that there are more important environmental
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. On the one hand,
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believe that the disappearance of some specific
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and
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may lead
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main
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of our environment.
Plants
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can usually produce oxygen and absorb
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greenhouse gases during their breathing.
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, if there are less plant species exist, air pollution may become more serious without help from
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.
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, the world needs
animals
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. Some kinds of herbivores may help
people
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to wipe out the pests when they are eating.
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, they are
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important characters to protect
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and grass.
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, others think that there are more environmental
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more important than the ideas from the above. Car emissions and industrial gases can produce carbon monoxide, which can both
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air pollution and health damage. Deforestation
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humans
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brings air pollution
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no
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plants’
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activities. In that case, not just the extinction of
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and
plants
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cause
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important environmental
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but others
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to be more important
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cause
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by
humans
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. In my opinion, I agree with the
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group. The serious environmental
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not mainly
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cause
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by the disappearance of
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and
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, but
more
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likely
lead
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to
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the
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human factors. From the above example, I clearly mentioned three main causes which they all
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. In conclusion,
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, many
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think when
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or
plants
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died
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, they will lead to a serious
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of
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environment
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the environment
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. I still agree with the second group of
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that other
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produce
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humans
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could lead
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to a
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a
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ever worse
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.
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  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
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