The two charts below show the percentage of films released and tickets sold by genre, in 1996 and 2000, in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two charts below show the percentage of films released and tickets sold by genre, in 1996 and 2000, in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two bar graphs illustrate the proportion of
movies
and
tickets
which were sold out in 1996 and 2000 in a European country.
Overall
, drama and comedy
movies
were the most created
movies
in the country, albeit fancy and
romance
were the least released
movies
. The same pattern can be seen in terms of sold
tickets
in the given two years.
To begin
with, in 1996, approximately 25% of drama films were released,
whereas
in 2000, it increased by nearly 35%. There was an increase in all the types of
film
released over the entire span, albeit
romance
films released have not any fluctuations in 1996
as well as
2000. Moving to the
film
tickets
which were sold, nearly the same percentage (15%) of sold
tickets
for dramas can be seen in 1996 and 2000. In 1996, 20% of comedy
film
tickets
had been sold
whereas
approximately 20% of
film
tickets
sold in 2000. Compared to drama and comedy
tickets
, fantasy and
romance
had the lowest proportion of sold
tickets
in both years. Nearly 5% or below 5% of sold
tickets
can be seen in fantasy
as well as
romance
in 1996 and 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words movies, tickets, romance, film with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage of films released
  • tickets sold by genre
  • main features
  • make comparisons
  • trends observed
  • significant changes
  • genre popularity
  • relationship between genres
  • corresponding ticket sales
  • correlations or divergences
  • most popular genres
  • consistent popularity
  • emerged genres
  • marked increases or decreases
  • cinematic preferences
  • consumer demand
  • box office performance
  • film industry impact
  • notable improvements or declines
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