The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.
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The table shows the
percentage
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of
school
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children that attended the four types of secondary
schools
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(
Specialist
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,Grammar,Voluntary-controlled, and Community
schools
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) in the timeline of 2000,2005,2009.
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,the table shows the
attendance
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of four different
schools
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.In the
table
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it is evident that community
schools
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had the highest
percentage
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which are attended students in 2009. During the same time period
specialist
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school
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was recorded with less
attendance
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. The community
schools
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were the best
school
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which was recorded with the highest
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of
attendance
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among all. In 2000 it is recorded has joint least
attendance
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with 12%
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specialist
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school
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. Over the time ,period there was a sudden jump in
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from 32% in 2005 to 58%. Voluntary-controlled
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have faced a sustainable drop from 52% in the starting to 20% in the end. Grammar and
specialist
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schools
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also
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progressively declined as voluntary-controlled
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but not in a drastic change. Grammar
schools
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had a drop of 50% from 2000 to 2009.
Specialist
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schools
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have a small portion of the drop is 12% in 2000 to 11% in 2005 and 10% in the final year of 2009.
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