The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.
The table shows the
percentage
of
school
children that attended the four types of secondary
schools
(
Specialist
,Grammar,Voluntary-controlled, and Community
schools
) in the timeline of 2000,2005,2009.
Overall
,the table shows the
attendance
of four different
schools
.In the
table
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it is evident that community
schools
had the highest
percentage
which are attended students in 2009. During the same time period
specialist
school
was recorded with less
attendance
. The community
schools
were the best
school
which was recorded with the highest
percentage
of
attendance
among all. In 2000 it is recorded has joint least
attendance
with 12%
along with
specialist
school
. Over the time ,period there was a sudden jump in
attendance
from 32% in 2005 to 58%. Voluntary-controlled
schools
have faced a sustainable drop from 52% in the starting to 20% in the end. Grammar and
specialist
schools
percentage
also
progressively declined as voluntary-controlled
schools
but not in a drastic change. Grammar
schools
had a drop of 50% from 2000 to 2009.
Specialist
schools
have a small portion of the drop is 12% in 2000 to 11% in 2005 and 10% in the final year of 2009.
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