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THE MOST IMPORTANT AIM OF SCIENCE SHOULD BE TO IMPROVE PEOPLE’S LIVES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

#aim #science #people’s #lives
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Science
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 is crucial for a better human
life
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.
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 is said that the most important aim of
science
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 is to improve people’s
lives
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. Advancement in
science
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 has both positive and negative aspects;
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, the importance of
science
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 in everyday
life
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 cannot be denied. In
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 essay, both
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 and positive effects of
science
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 on human
life
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 will be discussed. With the evolution of
scientific
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 era,
the
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human
lives
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 have
revolutionized
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 completely. Progress in all walks of
life
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 is the fruit of scientific technology.
Science
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 has evolved the methods of farming
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 which we can have all sorts of fruits and vegetables in a much better quality. The invention of
computer
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 has solved many problems and it has made human work much easier.
Internet
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The Internet
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 has converted the whole
world
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 into a global village
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 which one can do any work or online business in any country of the
world
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. Many diseases which were incurable in the past are now being treated using different treatment options.
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 has not only resulted in a better
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life style
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lifestyle
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 but has
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 brought innovations in many fields like communication, healthcare, technology, education
etc.
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etc
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science
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 has brought a positive change in people’s
lives
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. As there are pros and cons of everything.
Science
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also
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 has its negative aspects. The scientific knowledge has proved to be a double-edged sword. The invention of
atomic
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the atomic
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 bomb is one
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 example, which has devastating effects on mankind. It has resulted in
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world
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 war.
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Also
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science
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 has made many tasks so
easier
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 for mankind that they are becoming habitual of convenience.
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is resulting
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 in
sedentary
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a sedentary
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life style
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lifestyle
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 with little or no physical activity.
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, with all its positive and negative aspects;
science
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 possesses tremendous potential to enhance people’s
lives
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 in various domains. For sure, it is inevitable for
progress
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the progress
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 of mankind. By prioritizing the application of scientific discoveries for the betterment of humanity; we can build a
world
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that is
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 healthier, more connected, and more sustainable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial role
  • enhancing
  • quality of human life
  • advancements
  • medicine
  • healthcare
  • scientific research
  • solving societal problems
  • improving living standards
  • global issues
  • climate change
  • food scarcity
  • technological advancements
  • limitations
  • negative consequences
  • ethical considerations
  • sustainability
  • environmental preservation
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