The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.
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The table illustrates the proposed reading and writing ability percentages by the
continents
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and by male and female population for four years.
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, there is a high literacy rate in the world of men compared to women.
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, Europe holds the top position of all regions. Based on
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, Africa desperately needs interventions to develop their school systems. Boys in Europe have the
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greatest
education levels which is 99.2%
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girls in Africa hold the lowest place at a rate of 53.9%.
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,
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overall
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rating is
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62.5% for them.
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, the gap
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sexes
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in studying is a whopping 17.7% for Africa.
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population in America is the second largest in the world and it is 93.6%.
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,
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Oceania
with 93.4% literates represents the most balanced
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academics.
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, the discrepancy is only 1.5%. It can be proposed that
Australian
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school system considers equality in schools.
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