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The diagram on 13th page shows what kind of changes was taking place from 1996 to 2003 years in the use of gadgets and technology in people homes in the United Kingdom

The diagram on 13th page shows what kind of changes was taking place from 1996 to 2003 years in the use of gadgets and technology in people homes in the United Kingdom
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The diagram on
13th
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the 13th
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 page shows what kind of changes
was
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were
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 taking place from 1996 to 2003 years in the use of gadgets and
technology
 in
people
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people's
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 homes in the United Kingdom. There is information about four
type
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types
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 of
technology
, including CD players, mobile phones, Internet access and home computers. The graph provides only one basic trend – upward. The most popular device during the entire observation period was
CD
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the CD
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players
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player
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.
Since
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From
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 1996, when CD players had 60
percentages
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per cent
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, to 2003 with more than 80
percentages
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per cent
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,
use
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the use
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 of
this
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these
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 devices increased gradually but steadily. The next most used
technology
 in 1996 was
home
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a home
the home
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 computer with 30
percentages
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per cent
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. The
percentages
 stayed
on
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at
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 the same level for two years, after which
using
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use
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 climbed sharply and reached 50
percentages
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per cent
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. The biggest rise in usage compared to others demonstrated the following
gadget
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gadgets
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. Mobile
phone’s
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phone
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percentages
 started from 20
percentages
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per cent
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 and increased three and a half times. The newest
technology
 among those shown is Internet access. It appeared in 1988 and
used
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was used
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 by 10
percentages
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per cent
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 of consumers.
However
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,However
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 for
next
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the next
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 4 years
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,
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there was
remarkable
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a remarkable
the remarkable
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 rose. But
this
technology
 has not reached the level of others.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words technology, percentages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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