Topic 2: These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Migration in
such
greener pastures is a common thing these days. People opine
children
of
such
parents benefit from being raised in a foreign land, whilst others think life is rather difficult for these kids.
This
essay seeks to look at both views and I will state my opinion too. On the one hand, most of these
children
grow up into great adults in varying professions.
For instance
, in the United Kingdom, most pupils in the early years of schooling have free education.
This
gives equal opportunities to foreigners whose
children
are citizens of the land by virtue of being born there to have the same exposure as actual natives of the United Kingdom.
Such
environments reward hard work so as long as a ward with a foreign background excels academically, they will acquire the jobs of their dreams once they qualify.
Also
, most Western countries reward talents unlike developing nations where people take up jobs not because they are passionate but because of the earnings from the work that will enable them to live comfortable lives. I definitely think these benefits cannot be achieved in one's native land and will say
such
folks have an upper hand.
On the other hand
, in some societies,
children
from foreign lands grow into vices.
This
is a common finding in America. To illustrate
this
, most people of African descent are aware their countries promote childhood discipline to shape one's attitude. But in countries like America, laws frown on disciplining
children
and make it difficult for parents to groom their
children
. These
children
grow up making decisions that lead them to nowhere as adults. Most school dropouts in America are foreign and they are the ones involved in much violence.
This
is because the parents are unable to straighten the lives of their
children
in ways they know best as they are bound by some restricting laws in these foreign lands.
To sum up
, raising kids in foreign lands comes with pros and cons.
However
, I am of the opinion these
children
have more gains than losses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration
  • Globalization
  • Opportunities
  • Diversity
  • Assimilation
  • Adaptability
  • Language acquisition
  • Education
  • Career prospects
  • Social connections
  • Isolation
  • Cultural identity
  • Support systems
  • Parental guidance
  • Ambiguous
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