Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of people assert that the

overall

level

health

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of health

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of the community will

upgrade

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be upgraded

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by

increment

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an increment

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in

sports

equipment and playgrounds.

However

, some people think that other measures should be taken in order to

enhancement

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in

health

of citizens. I personally believe that only

exercise

do

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not

guarantees

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the

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apply

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public

health

. Nowadays, the main root cause of many diseases is stress.

However

, daily workout not only helps individuals to stay in good condition but

also

leads to reduce their stress.

Moreover

, increasing the number of

sports

amenities and playgrounds

along with

the

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some productive

sports

schedules can encourage children,

the

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youth and senior citizens to

regular

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exercise

.

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regularly.

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Thus

, governments should provide more and better

sports

equipment in order to improve

the

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apply

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public

health

. I believe that three main factors contribute to

have

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a healthy lifestyle; a healthy diet, regular

exercise

and an effective healthcare system.

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, as anyone

know

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, fast food and junk food are so delicious but so unhealthy and eating them excessively can lead to some diseases

such

as

cardio-vascular

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cardiovascular

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problems.

In addition

, individuals

at

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of

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any age regularly need check-ups in clinics to prevent some diseases

such

as different types of cancers.

Thus

, in a healthy society people should eat hygienic foods with high nutritional value,

do

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consistent medical examinations and daily workouts. To summarize, it is obvious that

exercise

can promote the public

health

.

However

, we should not ignore the fact that consuming unhealthy foods and

lack

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the lack

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of a first-rate

health

care system have detrimental effects on the

overall

health

condition of the community.