laast month you had holiday and you stayed with some friends .Thet hacve sent you somr of photros of the holiday.write a letter to your frirnds

Dear
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kichu
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kitchen
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I was so busy after our tour.,First I thank you for sending our photos.All the photos are gorgeous especially you.My most memorable event was swimming.I had no idea about swimming.but you thought of me. I thank you . I could not more time in my office .sorry for my late reply.you know
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am a new employee in my office.so I have a lot of work.
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even if
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do not use social media.
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could not open my WhatsApp for 2 days. I opened our photo yesterday. If you visit India you must come to my home.
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am very excited to see you.My parents
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told me about you.When you come to my home we will visit our nearby botanical garden.It is a very fabulous place. . Hope to see you soon Lovingly yours Hasna
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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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