The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.

The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.
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The upside graph indicates the duration that immigrants were inclined to stay in the UK from 2000 to 2008. There
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significant that the amount of up to 2
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is the largest in these nine
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. Another chart is about why migrants want to come UK. The most two common reason is work and study. Looking into more detail in the upside graph, we can observe that
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it has gradually increased, 2 to 4
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was always the lowest length of the three options. It had not exceeded 100 in any other year.
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, up to 2
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was the most people's option during the time.
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, 4 or more
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constantly in the middle.
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, if we
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the pie chart below in more detail, it is evident that the sum of percentage work and study is up to 70 per cent, and only sixteen per cent are accompanied or joined the family.
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, another
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and no reason stated is merely seven per cent.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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