The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.
The line graph illustrates immigrants intend how many
years
to stay between 2000 and 2008 and the pie chart indicates why they want to go as a percentage in the UK in 2008.
Overall
, majority
of the people who migrate to the UK give the biggest reasons Correct article usage
the majority
about
work and study. Change preposition
for
Also
, it is clear that
intended
length of stay increased Correct article usage
the intended
in
up to 2 and 2 to 4 Change preposition
to
years
.
Looking at the line figure first, immigrants who intend to stay over 2 years
increased with time, it started at 150 thousand in the year 2000, and then
rose steadily 250000
by 2004 , before remaining at the same level Change preposition
to 250000
at the end
of the period. However
, humans who staying
from 2 to 4 Wrong verb form
stayed
years
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
50000
at the beginning, after which they remained at the same level over seven Correct your spelling
50,000
years
to reach approximately 1 million in the final year. The other category had a fluctuation at 150000.
In pie
chart, work and study were the Add an article
a pie
the pie
most
largest segment for migration, which together accounted for 70 Change the adjective
apply
percent
. they followed by Change the spelling
per cent
accompany
family, it experienced 16%. Other reasons witnessed 14%.Change the verb form
accompanying
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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