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The given plans illustrate the southwest of the

airport

now and after

development

next year.

Firstly

, facing the departures before

development

there is check-in on the left

side

and

the

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on the

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right

side

there is

cafe

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a cafe

the cafe

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. But, after

development

the

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of the

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airport

to access the departures there will be one new change which is

bag

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a bag

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drop on the left

side

in front of security

passport

control

Moreover

, the

check in

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check-in

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will be switching sides to the right

side

instead

left

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the left

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, and a

cafe

will be on

left

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the left

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side

down the corner.

Additionally

, by going through the security

passport

control

travelers

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travellers

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will face

walkway

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the walkway

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directly and eight gates.

However

, after updating the

airport

in the next year, with going through the security

passport

control

travelers

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travellers

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will face shops,

new

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a new

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sky train and 18 gates.

Finally

, the arrivals people will not see

kind

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the kind

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of facilities when finishing from the

passport

control

customs, whilst after

development

the arrivals people

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the people of the arrival

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when they finish from

passport

control

customs there will be three new things

such

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apply

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cafe

, ATM and car hire.

Overall

, the new

airport

after

development

will

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have

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more gates,

long

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a long

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sky train and more facilities.

Furthermore

, check-in and

cafe

changed sides.

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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5 paragraphs

197 words

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

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