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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given plans illustrate the southwest of the
airport
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 now and after
development
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 next year.
Firstly
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, facing the departures before
development
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 there is check-in on the left
side
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 and
the
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on the
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 right
side
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 there is
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cafe
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a cafe
the cafe
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. But, after
development
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the
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of the
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airport
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 to access the departures there will be one new change which is
bag
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a bag
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 drop on the left
side
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 in front of security
passport
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control
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.
Moreover
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, the
check in
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check-in
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 will be switching sides to the right
side
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instead
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 of
left
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the left
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, and a
cafe
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 will be on
left
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the left
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side
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 down the corner.
Additionally
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, by going through the security
passport
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control
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travelers
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travellers
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 will face
walkway
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the walkway
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 directly and eight gates.
However
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, after updating the
airport
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 in the next year, with going through the security
passport
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control
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travelers
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travellers
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 will face shops,
new
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a new
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 sky train and 18 gates.
Finally
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, the arrivals people will not see
kind
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the kind
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 of facilities when finishing from the
passport
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control
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 customs, whilst after
development
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the arrivals people
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the people of the arrival
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 when they finish from
passport
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control
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 customs there will be three new things
such
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 as
,
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apply
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cafe
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, ATM and car hire.
Overall
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, the new
airport
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 after
development
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 will
be
Verb problem
have
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 more gates,
long
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a long
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 sky train and more facilities.
Furthermore
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, check-in and
cafe
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 changed sides.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words airport, development, side, cafe, passport, control with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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