The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shows below.
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The bar chart compares three different
class
of Fix the agreement mistake
classes
income's
Change noun form
income
spendings
on fast food per week in the year Replace the word
spent
of
1990 in the UK and the line graph illustrates the amount of consumption of Change preposition
apply
hamburgers
, Use synonyms
fish
& Use synonyms
chips
and Use synonyms
pizza
over a Use synonyms
20 years
period.
Despite the fact that the people in high Correct your spelling
20-year
income
category spent the most on Correct your spelling
low-income
hamburgers
and Use synonyms
pizza
, Use synonyms
fish
& Use synonyms
Use synonyms
chips
Correct word choice
and chips
was
more popular Change the verb form
were
between
folk in the middle class. Change preposition
among
Also
, unlike the rise in the consumption of Linking Words
hamburgers
and Use synonyms
fish
& Use synonyms
Use synonyms
chips
Correct word choice
and chips
over
, Rephrase
apply
pizza
's take-in was reduced between 1970 and 1985.
Looking at the bar chart, we can see that Use synonyms
middle-income
class of the society spent 25 million pounds on Correct article usage
the middle-income
fish
& Use synonyms
chips
Use synonyms
while
the other two groups spent a little over 15 million. Linking Words
Also
, Linking Words
fish
& Use synonyms
chips
Use synonyms
was
the favourite fast food of the Change the verb form
were
low budget
folk Add a hyphen
low-budget
while
Linking Words
on the other hand
, Linking Words
two
upper classes Correct article usage
the two
prefered
Correct your spelling
preferred
hamburgers
more. Use synonyms
Moreover
, as we move towards the groups of higher income, expenditure on pizzas Linking Words
increase
; to be Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
percise
, each group spent about 7, 12 and 18 million pounds on pizzas respectively.
Considering the line graph, Correct your spelling
precise
pizza
's consumption was at its highest in 1970 with 300 grams per week Use synonyms
while
people consumed little under 100 grams and just about 30 grams of Linking Words
fish
& Use synonyms
chips
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
, respectively. Use synonyms
Pizzas'
take-in declined Change noun form
Pizzas
while
the other two fast foods gained more popularity until 1982 when Linking Words
fish
& Use synonyms
chips
popularity took over the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
pizza's
. Change noun form
pizzas
Furthermore
, Linking Words
although
Linking Words
pizza
began to attract more people in 1985 again, the amount of eaten Use synonyms
hamburger
surpassed that of Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
Use synonyms
pizza's
in 1986.Change the noun form
pizzas
pizza
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hamburgers, fish, chips, pizza with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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