The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The display chart provides information on the
expenditure
of two countries France
as well as
UK
on consumer goods in 2010. It is given in pound
sterling. The chart shows the Fix the agreement mistake
pounds
expenditure
on cars
, computers, books, perfume and cameras.
In France
, in
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for
cars
expenditure
is 400000, in
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for
computers
it is nearly 380000, Add a comma
,computers
in
books it is 300000, in perfume it is 200000 and Change preposition
for
in
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for
cameras
it is 150000. In the Add a comma
,cameras
UK
, in cars
there is 450000, in computers
there is 350000, in Add a comma
,computers
books
there is more than 400000, in Add a comma
,books
perfume
there is around 150000 and in Add a comma
,perfume
cameras
it is more than 35000. The data is given in pounds sterling. Add a comma
,cameras
There
is Change the word
It
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a great
great
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greatly
different
in Replace the word
difference
camreas
in both Correct your spelling
cameras
nation
. The information is about the year 2010. The Change to a plural noun
nations
expenditur
on every Correct your spelling
expenditure
expenditures
things
are different.
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thing
To conclude
, the highest in France
was on
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for
cars
and in the UK
it was also
on
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for
cars
. The above data describes the expenditure
of the two nations they are France
and UK
.Correct article usage
the UK
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