The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates average
families
' expenditures based on their income per week in eight different categories over a 20-year period. As an overview, most
families
' expense proportion in 1968 belongs to payments for food.
In contrast
, in
this
country,
families
spent on leisure most among other categories in 2018.
However
, the lowest rate of expenditure of
families
belonged to the fuel and power expenses in 2014,
this
category remained the least popular and its
percentage
fell in 2018. As it can be observable, spending
money
on food was very popular among
families
at the beginning of the time period and they spent 35% of their weekly income on it.
However
,
this
category lost its popularity by having approximately 17% of their remuneration, and spending
money
on leisure became more interesting among
families
in 2018.
In addition
,
this
category experienced close to a 15% increase in its
percentage
over the given time span.
On the other hand
, the
percentage
of
money
spent by these groups of society increased significantly on payments to Transport with nearly 14% and Housing 18% growth in the
percentage
number of their expenditure in 2018.
Conversely
,
families
spent less of their weekly incomes on Fuel power, Clothing and footwear and personal goods and these categories achieved approximately 6%, 5%,and 6% of their expenses respectively.
Furthermore
, the rate of the
money
that was spent by these
families
remains steady at roughly 7% of their income.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, percentage, money with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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