The two maps below show an island before and after the construction some of tourists facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island before and after the construction some of tourists facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate changes on the
island
before and after the development of tourism.
Overall
, it is clear, that the
island
is approximately 250 metres long with palms and it is surrounded by sea with the beach on its western side. Over the period, the
island
witnessed dramatic changes with the setting up of a large number of tourist facilities, but the east side remains the same. The most noticeable transformation is the addition of hotel rooms. Accommodation was opened to the right and to the left from the
centre
. There are 6 rooms in the west parts, having a couple of palm trees in the
centre
.
In addition
, there are 9 rooms in the east part of the
centre
, that are linked with each other by footpaths.
Also
, the reception was developed in the
centre
, surrounded by a vehicle track, which leads north to the restaurant. A pier has
also
been constructed to the south of the
island
, allowing yachts access to the resort. The beach in the west remained untouched,
however
, it seems to be used for swimming.
Submitted by aleskovamaria02 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: