You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
the given line graph depicts information about the temperatures of three major cities at different months of the year.
To begin
with, it is quite evident from the line graph, that the temprature
in Paris and Dubai is 5 Correct your spelling
temperature
degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celsius
and 18 Capitalize word
Celsius
degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celsius
in the Capitalize word
Celsius
month
of January respectively. Then
it shows a gradual increase in temprature
Correct your spelling
temperature up to
upto
the month
of July in these cities and reaches upto
20 and 35 respectively. Later on, a slight increase in Correct your spelling
up to
temprature
in Dubai can be seen between July to August but Correct your spelling
temperature
temperatures
Paris
Change noun form
Paris's
Pari's
temprature
remains levelled off. After that, there is a gradual decrease which is clearly seen Correct your spelling
temperature
upto
December for both of these cities.
Correct your spelling
up to
On the other hand
, Correct article usage
the temprature
temprature
in Sydney is around 24 degrees Correct your spelling
temperature
temperatures
celsius
in the Capitalize word
Celsius
month
of January and then
it decreases moderately and reaches upto
13 degrees Correct your spelling
up to
celsius
in the Capitalize word
Celsius
month
of July. After that, it increases again gradually and reaches upto 23-degree
Correct your spelling
up to 23 degrees
celsius
.
Capitalize word
Celsius
overall
, Correct article usage
the temprature
temprature
of Paris and Dubai shows the same trend in the given time period but Sydney is the converse of it.Correct your spelling
temperature
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temprature, celsius, month, upto with synonyms.
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