The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal  between 1967 and 2007
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The line chart illustrates the minimum use of CO2 emission in metric tonnes by individuals in four different countries in the years 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, at the start of the
,
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the United Kindom was using the highest CO2
while
Italy rapidly grew throughout the years. we can fluctuation all nations. As per the line chart, the highest individual was using the co2 emission in the United Kingdom around 10.5 in 1967 followed by Sweden at almost 8.5.
However
, Sweden faced an upward trend of about 4 in the
year
1977 and the United Kingdom dropped by 1.
Furthermore
, Sweden dropped down throughout the
year
approximately 10 in 2007 and the United Kingdom decreased by 4.
On the other hand
, Italy and Portugal were the lowest in 1967 nearly 1 and 4. Both countries significantly experienced growth in the past
year
and reached 5 and 7.
Nevertheless
, once they reached in the
year
2007 Italy dramatically increased and reached 8 and Portugal 6.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • average emissions per person
  • trends
  • reduction
  • increase
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • pivotal years
  • industrial growth
  • policy changes
  • economic changes
  • energy sources
  • technology advancements
  • environmental policies
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