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you are invited to an interview but due to your previous appoinment you cannot go to there. Write an apology letter

#interview #appoinment #apology
Dear Sir, I am writing to apologize for not attending an
interview
 for a place studying a course at college held on 20th of September at 11 a.m Actually
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I knew that
this
interview
a
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crucial role
for
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in
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 studying at college.
However
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 because of my important previous
meeting
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 I had no control over that I was unable to participate in the
interview
. I
faithfully
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 apologize
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for that
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that
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 I have caused
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you. Tell the trust, I did not know one of my essential
appointment
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held
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 on the same day
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 your
interview
. After I checked my daily schedule two days ago, I
awared
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aware
awarded
about
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 it.
Therefore
 I will offer that
this
 appointment
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 2 days later. I should say that my first appointment
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 at 9 a.m on 20th of September. I think
this
interview
continues
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one
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our
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. So
that
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can you tell me how long the
interview
 will be
as well as
there
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if there
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 will be any tests during it ? If
this
 meeting
finish
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 on time I will try to catch
to
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up to
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 your meeting. Please accept my
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. Yours faithfully John Smith
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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