The maps show the changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005.

The maps show the changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005.
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The maps illustrate how Youngsville town in New Zealand changed over the period of 25 years from 1980 to 2005.
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, from an underdeveloped area with trees and residential areas, the town transformed into a more modernized one with various newly built amenities and the appearance of a new rail line and marina. Regarding the top side of the maps, whilst the hospital and the lake remained intact after the research period, the forest nearby was demolished by over two-thirds of the total to make way for a new park and the addition of many outdoor activities around the lake. At the same time, the Stadium and parking cars were constructed in the original site of residential places. The rail line close to the stadium was
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built from the middle of the map extending to the north. As can be seen from the other side of the river, we can see that the southern residential sites and woodlands were removed and replaced by new factories, warehouses, and skyscrapers around the south
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of the picture. After 25 years from the year 1980, both the school and railway station remained unchanged, and the airport
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its parking facilities in the southwest corner
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remained untouched.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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