The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart below depicts the amount of
men
and women
who passed the driving test
between 1980 to 2010 in one Asian country.
Overall
, the percentage of women
who passed the test
is higher compared to men
. Moreover
, the number
of men
who passed the driving test
increased gradually. Furthermore
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
women
who passed the tests in certain years are highest in the chart.
The amount of women
who pass the driving tests increases gradually as the time frame increases compared to men
. such
as in the year 1980 the number
of women
who passed the driving tests were
below 50% Correct subject-verb agreement
was
whereas
the number
of men
who passed in this
year was below 30%. Moreover
, the number
of women
who passed the driving test
in 2000 was the highest of all which is around 68% compared to men
which was below 50%.
Furthermore
, the number
of men
who passed the driving test
increased gradually as the year increased such
as in 1990 the percentage of men
who passed the test
was below 40% but gradually increased to around 50% in 2000 and finally
settled to this
in 2010.Submitted by sakib.sizan on
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