The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart below depicts the amount of
men
and Use synonyms
women
who passed the driving Use synonyms
test
between 1980 to 2010 in one Asian country.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the percentage of Linking Words
women
who passed the Use synonyms
test
is higher compared to Use synonyms
men
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
men
who passed the driving Use synonyms
test
increased gradually. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
women
who passed the tests in certain years are highest in the chart.
The amount of Use synonyms
women
who pass the driving tests increases gradually as the time frame increases compared to Use synonyms
men
. Use synonyms
such
as in the year 1980 the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
women
who passed the driving tests Use synonyms
were
below 50% Correct subject-verb agreement
was
whereas
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
men
who passed in Use synonyms
this
year was below 30%. Linking Words
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
women
who passed the driving Use synonyms
test
in 2000 was the highest of all which is around 68% compared to Use synonyms
men
which was below 50%.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
men
who passed the driving Use synonyms
test
increased gradually as the year increased Use synonyms
such
as in 1990 the percentage of Linking Words
men
who passed the Use synonyms
test
was below 40% but gradually increased to around 50% in 2000 and Use synonyms
finally
settled to Linking Words
this
in 2010.Linking Words
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