Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are conflicting views on whether or not

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the exploitation

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of

culture

for

tourism

to generate income will wreck it or whether some people believe that

culture

is being protected.

Although

I can see why the earlier viewpoint was held, I continue to believe that

tourism

will support the continuation of

culture

. On the one hand, those who value

culture

are damaged if they are used as a means of financial gain. The reason is that some sections of society become incensed when traditional traditions are lost.

For instance

, there are numerous variations of the traditional Vietnamese dish pho that might devalue the meal.

However

, because it was created improperly, it does not inspire much

besides

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things worse. Another factor that makes

tourism

harmful if it is not done properly is a lack of understanding of the significance of

culture

. Others,

on the other hand

, believe that

tourism

is a very effective way to preserve

culture

. The greatest way to preserve

culture

is to give it some exposure, which

tourism

is excellent at. Thanks to

travelers

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travellers

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from all over the world,

culture

has been preserved and grown in many nations; they visit, sample, return home, and tell others about their experiences, which improves the social impact even

further

. The government's budget is

also

increased by

tourism

, which can be utilized to fund a variety of programs to preserve cultural heritage USE SY In my perspective,

although

several individual

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think

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that travel

should be

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is

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responsible for bad

effective

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effects

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on

culture

, it

also

no doubt that

tourism

increase

more

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interest in

culture

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Thus

, several people demonstrate the positive impact that

tourism

has had on

culture

while

also

pointing out its drawbacks.

Instead

of concentrating on the earnings, it is important to preserve traditional customs in unique ways.