You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his petformance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Liam, I have recently attended your concert in Seattle and I am a huge fan of yours. I am writing

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letter to congratulate you on your impressive performance, all the players were so incredible in their performance at night. During your live show, I felt your innovation scale is the most unique sound compared to others, especially the song "Quiet", it evoked the time of my childhood memory. Your songs always encourage and give me various outcomes and though, there is no doubt I can not live without your playlist. As a violinist, I love to watch and listen to different types of festivals around the summer times

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as country music, EDM, rock etc. Gaining these experiences, I noticed collaborating with other players is an essential technique and allows the artist to build up their confidence on the stage at the same time.

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, the show inspired me to stand on the stage again after seeing your concert. I could possibly stand in front of the audience to perform my favourite song of yours. And I am really hoping that if you could give me some advice on my video that would be great as a support. Thank you so much for being part of the music industry Yours faithfully, LW

SowSat Sep 23 2023

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Task Response

Ensure the letter adequately addresses all points and is focused on the task at hand.

Coherence and Cohesion

Improve coherence by organizing the ideas in a more logical order and using appropriate transition words.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

214 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

captivating
stellar performance
entranced
musical prowess
virtuoso
encore
melodic
harmony
instrumental skills
musical journey
mentorship
aspiring
collaboration
feedback
inspired
invaluable guidance
musical aspirations
appreciation
influenced
répertoire

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