The graph below shows levels of online shopping by age group for different times of the day. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the proportion of
sales
when people went shopping online during a day in 2015, split by age
.
Overall
, people who are from 25 to 34 years old are the group
with the strongest increase and have the highest level of sales
in online shopping, while
elderly people’s figure was the lowest.
As seen in the given chart, before 9 a.m
., all age
groups
witnessed the lowest level of sales
at approximately 5%. However
, the next three hours saw a significant increase in the percentage of people from different age
groups
and the over-60 group
bought the most with nearly 20 per cent of sales
. In the afternoon (from 12 p
.m
. to 6 p
.m
.), the proportion of sales
for the youngest group
overtook the rest by a climb to 27% at 4-6 p
.m
., followed by that of 25-34 and 45-59 age
groups
, at 22 and 18 respectively.
From this
time to before 8 p
.m
., there was a steep growth in the percentage of sales
of the young adult group
and reached its peak at 33%, followed by 31% of 35 to 44-year-olds, 28% of the youngest group
, 22% of the middle-aged group
, while
the figure for the elderly who are aged 60 and over decreased significantly to just under 10%. After 8p.m
to 9 a.m
the next morning, the figures for sales
for all age
groups
dropped.Submitted by vuhien4397 on
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