The diagram below describes the stages in the process of making canned and bottled carbonated drinks.

The diagram below describes the stages in the process of making canned and bottled carbonated drinks.
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The diagram illustrates the steps involved in canned and bottled carbonated drinks production. There are 5 stages, from the cleaning step to the packaging one. The first stage is
that
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the raw
water
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is transferred to the filter, where it is cleaned and softened.
Next,
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water
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 is united with chemicals and goes through the pump.
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, electric heaters
sends
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water
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through the cooling pipe into the big machine. Having been left in the equipment with carbon dioxide,
water
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is evaporated and carbonated as well. In order to provide certain characteristics to the liquid, carbonated
water
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is delivered to the mixing tank. Here we can add colour, syrup or flavour.
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, it is filtered again and faces
with
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apply
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the fourth step, where cans or bottles are filled with
this
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consistency. The final product is wrapped into the boxes, and
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, transported to the supermarkets. At
this
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stage, the
water
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is ready to drink.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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