The diagram below describes the stages in the process of making canned and bottled carbonated drinks.
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in canned and bottled carbonated drinks production. There are 5 stages, from the cleaning step to the packaging one.
The first stage is
that
the raw Correct word choice
when
water
is transferred to the filter, where it is cleaned and softened. Next,
water
is united with chemicals and goes through the pump. Then
, electric heaters sends
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send
water
through the cooling pipe into the big machine. Having been left in the equipment with carbon dioxide, water
is evaporated and carbonated as well.
In order to provide certain characteristics to the liquid, carbonated water
is delivered to the mixing tank. Here we can add colour, syrup or flavour. Consequently
, it is filtered again and faces with
the fourth step, where cans or bottles are filled with Change preposition
apply
this
consistency. The final product is wrapped into the boxes, and then
, transported to the supermarkets. At this
stage, the water
is ready to drink.Submitted by aida.ai2000 on
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