The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
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The first bar chart shows the proportion of
men
to women
who engage in domestic activities. The second chart illustrates the duration taken by each gender to execute these home chores.
It is immediately evident that more females
than males
do cooking and cleaning whilst the opposite is true for house
repairs
.
It is apparent from the chart that, more women
than men
cook at 85% and 60% respectively. Likewise
cleaning, 68% of females
perform this
compared to 43% of males
. However
, a little around 20% of men
carry out house
repairs
, meanwhile only about a quarter of this
figure is true of women
who do house
repairs
. Pet care has similar numbers of each sex executing this
task at just over 20% for males
and 20% for females
.
The time spent by both genders to care for pets is the same at 20 minutes
. Males
take nearly the same amount of time to do house
repairs
as caring for pets at around 19 minutes
whilst females
engage in house
repairs
over 5 minutes
. Women
spend a longer time cooking in 85 minutes
but men
on the other hand
cook in 60 minutes
. Cleaning is completed in 65 minutes
by women
whilst men
do so in 45 minutes
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, females, males, house, repairs, minutes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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