You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given line graphs
illustrates
Change the verb form
illustrate
power
Add an article
the power
in
Change preposition
of
Australian
Dollar Correct article usage
the Australian
of
Australian commerce from 2004 to 2009 within China, Change preposition
in
Japan
and USA
Generally, Australia’s trade with China has significantly increased their Correct article usage
the USA
imports
while
Japan
and USA
maintain a similar level from 2004 to 2009. However
, exports
in Japan
has
increased in the first year Unnecessary verb
apply
while
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
continues
their range until 2006.
Wrong verb form
continued
Imports
and exports
in Japan
has
been started Change the verb form
have
by
A$20 billion and Change preposition
at
exports
has
Unnecessary verb
apply
achive
their maximum level of A$45 billion and Correct your spelling
achieve
achieved
then
has
started to Unnecessary verb
apply
decrese
, Correct your spelling
decrease
while
it’s
Correct your spelling
its
imports
maintain
Wrong verb form
maintained
a the
same level of A$20 billion until 2008 and Choose an article
the
then
it has been started to decrease slightly within 2008 and 2009.
Finally
there is no significant increment or decrement Add a comma
,Finally
of
Change preposition
in
imports
and exports
in the USA
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, usa, imports, exports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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