You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given line graphs
illustrates
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illustrate
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power
Add an article
the power
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in
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of
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Australian
Correct article usage
the Australian
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Dollar
of
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in
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Australian commerce from 2004 to 2009 within China,
Japan
and
USA
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the USA
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Generally, Australia’s trade with China has significantly increased their
imports
while
Japan
and
USA
maintain a similar level from 2004 to 2009.
However
,
exports
in
Japan
has
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apply
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increased in the first year
while
USA
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the USA
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continues
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continued
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their range until 2006.
Imports
and
exports
in
Japan
has
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have
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been started
by
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at
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A$20 billion and
exports
has
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apply
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achive
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achieve
achieved
their maximum level of A$45 billion and
then
has
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apply
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started to
decrese
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decrease
,
while
it’s
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its
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imports
maintain
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maintained
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a the
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the
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same level of A$20 billion until 2008 and
then
it has been started to decrease slightly within 2008 and 2009.
Finally
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,Finally
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there is no significant increment or decrement
of
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in
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imports
and
exports
in the
USA
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, usa, imports, exports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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