some people say that the only reason for learning foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign languages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that

schools

should get more entertaining for

students

,

while

others hold the opinion that imparting education should be their only purpose. Personally, I completely agree that

schools

need to be more entertaining. In

this

essay, I shall explain why. It can be denied that the main purpose of the

schools

is to educate. Nowadays

schools

are mainly focusing on teaching

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stories

and passing rather than improving soft and cognitive skills through entertaining activities.

This

way is not really effective for

students

in the modern society.

Therefore

,

schools

should change the

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method

of teaching and the easiest way is to add more entertainment. To start with, there

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variety

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of persuasive factors

which

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that

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could bring positive outcomes.

Firstly

, it can be the way which helps

students

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mental stress

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in

the

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studies or exams.

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according to

the research of

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local professors, showed that 80% of the

students

in universities are suffering from chronic stress and anxiety, which is caused by the heavy academic load during exams. After adding more entertainment during

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teaching

process, the

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of

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students

reduced to 30%.

Furthermore

,

this

change may lead to

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more

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in going to the school of each student and being more attracted towards getting their

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. It will be easy for

students

to comprehend the lessons.

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, an article published in Media headquarters in Ha Tinh province

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that there is a large portion of

students

, associate studying in school as dull or not engaging enough.

Thus

, it

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to be more entertaining

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a good method.

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, I suppose that

schools

should have more entertainment during

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process. So that

students

feel the connection that

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belong to a school

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full of encouragement and amusement.