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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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The given column chart illustrates the figure for the annual
income
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 of families in the US in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, over
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except
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 2011), the number of Americans with high
income
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 was more than others and increased after 8 years,
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 the number of people with middle
income
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 remained constant. In 2007, the number of families with
income
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 of less than $25000 in a
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 was about 25
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,
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 that of
income
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 of dollar 25000-49999 stood at about 27
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. From
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year
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 till 2011, these numbers increased slightly by about 4
million
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 in both groups, after which these numbers decreased again by roughly 2
million
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. Over the entire period, the figure for dollars 50000-74000 stayed roughly the same at about 21
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 and the households with
income
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 of dollars 75000-99999 were at about 14
million
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. It can be seen clearly families with high
income
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 which is more than dollars 100000 per
year
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 were about 29
million
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 in the first
year
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 and after a slight fall of 2
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, it increased again dramatically by 6
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 which took the first level in
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