Some oeple think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult ought to be optional instead of compulsary. To what extend to you agree?

It is

obviuose

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obvious

obviously

that nowadays

children

have a lot of stress on

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. Some people believe some

subjects

such

as mathematics and philosophy have to include their syllabus mandatory

while

others think it is not mandatory. Personally, I agree

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those

subjects

should not be mandatory in their syllabus. I will discuss

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paragraphs.

First,

everyone has

right

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to select what they should learn in

their

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future, it is common for

children

as well. My personal idea is as a parent we want to give them support only, we should give them a chance to select which path they like to

go

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in their future. Because some kids have talents

such

as art, drama and music. If we force them to choose something they do not like it will harm their future.

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will badly

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on

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them, so we want to be more careful

while

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we

selecting

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subjects

for them. As parents and

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we want to understand

children

have various abilities and we

want

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give them

for

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support to go

their

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own path which will

bright

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their careers.

However

,

children

should learn analytical ability from their childhood, which is compulsory.

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their

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young age teachers and parents have to teach them how to solve problems analytically and wisely. For

this

, they can add mathematics and philosophy

subjects

for

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their curriculum as a foundation of their education. Which will help them to have a strong analysis thinking pattern from their childhood. In conclusion, we want to have different skilled people in the world to make it a

success

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place.

Therefore

, we need different skilled characters, not only scientists. My opinion is mathematics and philosophy would be optional

subjects

when they

in

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secondary

shcool

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school

but in their primary education we want to give them basic knowledge of those

subjects

.