The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the monthly change in temperatures in
Paris
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Dubai
and Sydney.
From an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is evident that Linking Words
Paris
has the lowest average Use synonyms
temperature
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while
the climate in Linking Words
Dubai
is mostly hot over the months.
In January, Use synonyms
Paris
is reported to have the lowest Use synonyms
temperature
at 5 Use synonyms
Celcius
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while
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Dubai
is warmer at 18 Use synonyms
Celcius
. Sydney has the warmest January at 24 Use synonyms
Celcius
.
The climate in Use synonyms
Paris
is favourable since continually increases to July and reaches a peak at 20 degrees in August. In fall and winter, the Parisians suffer from cold weather, significantly at 5 degrees in December. The Use synonyms
temperature
in Use synonyms
Dubai
is mostly warm over the year and reaches its hottest month in August at 35 Use synonyms
Celcius
before dropping to 23 degrees in December. Use synonyms
Lastly
, people living in Sydney have a cool summer with the lowest Linking Words
temperature
at 13 in July and slightly warmer to the end of the year at 24 Use synonyms
Celcius
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