You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the monthly change in temperatures in
Paris
, Dubai
and Sydney.
From an overall
perspective, it is evident that Paris
has the lowest average temperature
, while
the climate in Dubai
is mostly hot over the months.
In January, Paris
is reported to have the lowest temperature
at 5 Celcius
, while
Dubai
is warmer at 18 Celcius
. Sydney has the warmest January at 24 Celcius
.
The climate in Paris
is favourable since continually increases to July and reaches a peak at 20 degrees in August. In fall and winter, the Parisians suffer from cold weather, significantly at 5 degrees in December. The temperature
in Dubai
is mostly warm over the year and reaches its hottest month in August at 35 Celcius
before dropping to 23 degrees in December. Lastly
, people living in Sydney have a cool summer with the lowest temperature
at 13 in July and slightly warmer to the end of the year at 24 Celcius
.Submitted by mtri28899 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paris, dubai, temperature, celcius with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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