Some people say that advertising is extremely seccessful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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has always been an important part of
marketing
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process for
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companies and
bussinesses
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businesses
. Some
individuals
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believe that advertising is extremely successful at
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affecting
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people
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and
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them to buy products
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others believe that
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does not have
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an effect
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on
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anymore. I am going to discuss both views and give my own opinion in
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essay.
Propaganda
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can be a great
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for companies to promote their products and sell them
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a higher price. Some kinds of
propaganda
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is
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so boring for
individuals
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and customers to get
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from
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them
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, but there are still a lot of ways to influence
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and make them
to
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buy products from companies.
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, there are a lot of
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bussines
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business
owners that are still investing
on
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advertisement
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advertisements
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for their jobs and finding
cutomers
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customers
in
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way
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.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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would not
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influenced by the
advertisement
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ways. They believe that
propaganda
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is not a good
way
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to promote your
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bussines
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business
and they think that it is an old method. Some
people
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may even choose to turn the television off when the
advertisement
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comes up
,
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because they believe that
propagandas
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propaganda
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are
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boring and it is not attractive for them to watch. In my own opinion,
advertisement
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could still be the best
way
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to find customers for your
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bussines
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business
due to
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the effect that it has on
individuals
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.
Moreover
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,
people
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who are designing
propaganda
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for a company should have creativity and be attractive. If the designers have enough creativity, they would make an attractive
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for the company.
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, they can show
people
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that
individuals
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who are using the product are happy or the product is so
usefull
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useful
for them. In
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way
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, it can become the best
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for the owners to promote their job. In conclusion,
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advertisement
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can still be a
way
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to find new customers for the company or to start a
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bussines
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business
.
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