The graph below gives information abouth the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line chart below compares the portion of people that live in urban areas between 1970 and 2020 in
Philippines
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the Philippines
Malaysia
, Thailand
and Indonesia, all four
being east asian
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Asian
countries
. Also
it estimates these figures until 2040.
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Malaysia
had achieved the highest figure
among these countries
while
Thailand
's population
prefers to live outside of cities
the most. Also
, we witness the same increasing trend in all four
countries
in the future.
Looking at the graph, Philippines
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the Philippines
Malaysia
had almost 30 per-cent
of their Correct your spelling
per cent
population
living in cities
back in 1970, with Pilippines
having a slightly more Correct your spelling
Philippines
figure
. They changed place twice until 1990, when Correct article usage
the Philippines
Philippines
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Philippine's
Philippines'
population
in cities
began to decline. Not long after that, Malaysia
achieved the highes
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highest
figure
among these four
countries
. The decline in Philippines
continued until 2010 when they again, started to move back to Correct article usage
the Philippines
cities
and this
trend has continued ever since.
It can also
be seen that,
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Thailand
and Indonesia had close 20 per-cent
and 15 Correct your spelling
per cent
per-cent
of their Correct your spelling
per cent
population
living in cities
in 1970. They both attracted more citizens to live in towns until 1990 when Thailand
's figure
almost stopped changint
until 2020. Correct your spelling
changing
Whereas
Indonesia rocketed and rose to the
second place between these Correct article usage
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four
countries
in 2010.Submitted by parham.moonesi on
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