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The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The three charts depict the information about the Australian trade in Australian dollars that occurred between China,
Japan
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 and
USA
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the USA
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 from 2004 to 2009. After analyzing the charts, it can be seen clearly that
Australia
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 did the most
of
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trade with
Japan
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 in the given time period
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 the US is at the bottom.
In contrast
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 to
this
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,
Australia
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 earned a large amount of income from
Japan
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 by exporting more, with a peak of 40
billion
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 AUD in 2008 and spent 30
billion
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due to
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 high imports from the United States in the same year. The charts
further
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 demonstrate that
Australia
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 performed a uniform business with China where imports and exports were increasing simultaneously till 2008. Afterwards, Importing obtained a constant behaviour of 30
billion
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 AUD and exports overtook them at the same amount.
Overall
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this
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 data elaborates that
Australia
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 was earning Profit from
Japan
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 from 2004 and started making money from China after 2008 but always faced a loss of 10
billion
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 in USA trade.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, australia, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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