Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the enhancement of technology, the entire world
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touched and connected than past era. I completely agree with the given statement as we are experiencing the benefits now, and through
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In today
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,
whole
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the whole
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world
connected
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to each other easily by using social media applications. Even
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are more facilities WhatsApp, email, messenger, Twitter and Telegram are the most common among them. Actually, as a witness and as a person who
getting
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the benefits of them it's easy to point out some reasons to get them more popular. If someone has a suitable device and internet access, he or she can easily get in touch
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a single button press and no need to have
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extraordinary knowledge regarding technology.
User
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interface is very
attrctive
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attractive
and simple ,
therefore
anyone can use them without
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guidance. Modified user interfaces
which
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address
to
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differently able people are
also
avaiable
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available
and there are features to customise options
according to
their
need
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. As an example, for the blind community they can reset the applications with sounds and notifications
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as a recording.
Therefore
they can use social
medias
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to connect with others independently.
Secondly
, those appliances provide
opportunity
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an opportunity
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to connect with others even though they live thousands of miles
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away from loved ones. There are more smart options
such
as
ability
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the ability
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of sharing
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not only texts
,
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but
also
images, documentaries, videos
and
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recordings etc.
This
may be the main reason to popular it among
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society. Nowadays, humans tend to migrate and settle down in developed countries and even it is they can lively connect with family members daily.
For instance
, one of my friends who
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in Australia for more than five years, is getting connected with family via WhatsApp video calls daily. My husband is working for a New
Zelend
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Zealand
company and even
he
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lives in Sri Lanka he
able
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to join
with
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meetings and discussions via
Teams
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app. It means those social applications are a
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for the people.
To sum up
, as new technological attachments are highly available and popular, they are preparing the background to connect
each
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other easily.
Therefore
I strongly agree
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that statement.
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