The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given chart illustrates how
Anthropology
graduates'
students from Change noun form
graduates
single
university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course, Correct article usage
a single
while
the table provides the salaries of the anthropologists in
Change preposition
apply
work
after five years. Overtime
, a general trend half of Correct your spelling
Over time
anthropology
graduates
went
for Wrong verb form
go
a full-time
Remove the article
full-time work
a full-time job
work
, although
government sector employment is the highest salaries anthropology
graduates
average after 5 years of working.
As can be seen, graduate students' destination from one university 52% went for full-time. work
, while
part time
job it's 15%. Add a hyphen
part-time
In addition
, unfortunately
12% and 8% Add a comma
,unfortunately
students
are unemployed Change preposition
of students
also
not know. However
, it's know
working during studies could be difficult, so the rates of full-time postgrad study and Wrong verb form
known
part time
postgrad study Add a hyphen
part-time
wasn't
that high enough.
Correct subject-verb agreement
weren't
Secondly
, the amount salaries of anthropology
graduates
after 5 years' work
there are three types of employment; government sector 50% achieve 100,000$+. Furthermore
, Change preposition
of freelance
freelance
consultants 40% are taking 100,000$+. Change preposition
of freelance
Finally
, private companies are the lowest only 30% achieve 100,000$+.Submitted by hamoudisayyah on
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