The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart illustrates the information regarding
closures
and openings
of shops
in a specific country in numbers
over a 7-year
period.
As an overview, in this
country, the lowest number
of closures
happened in 2015. Conversely
, the closure numbers
noticeably experienced a significant rise a year
after that. Also
, the openings
figure shows its highest number
at the beginning of the time period. The number
of openings
also
witnessed its lowest number
a year
after its highest number
.
As it can be seen, however
, both closures
and openings
numbers
decreased for a year
, the decline that happened for openings
was more noticeable than closures
. This
led to the opening of shops
number
decreased to over 4000 in 2012. However
, both of these figures show after 2 years gained near equivalent numbers
in 2014 with approximately 6100 and 6500 for closures
and openings
respectively.
On the other hand
, the number
of shops
that closed and opened experienced significant change from 2014 to 2016. Consequently
, the number
of closures
fell in 2015 and gained below 1000; therefore
, the number
of openings
overtook closures
with 4,000 shops
in that year
. While
closure numbers
exponentially rose in 2016 to over 5000, the number
of openings
remained steady. However
, both described figures show negligible change in 2017, the number
of openings
decreased to 3000. In contrast
, the number
of closures
was insignificant increasing to 2018.Submitted by hedoyeraisy on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words closures, openings, shops, numbers, number, year with synonyms.
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