The graph below gives information abouth the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The display graph gives data about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities
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Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020, Unnecessary verb
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as well as
predictions for 2030 and 2040.
In Philippiness
, in 1970, it was more than 30 which increased by 32 in 1980, Correct your spelling
Philippines
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in 1990, it which
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very fast around 50, and by 2040 it was the highest with 55. In Malaysia, in 1970, it was 30, Wrong verb form
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it kept on increasing till 2040 with more than 80. In Thailand, in 1970, it was around 20, in 1980, it was 25, in 2030 it was nearly 40 and in 2040 it were
45. In Indonesia, in 1970 it was between 10 to 20, and in 2040 it was 55.
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, the information is from 1970 to 2020 and 2030 and 2040 is
predictions and population in four countries living in cities.Correct subject-verb agreement
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