The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart provides information on spending on goods consumption in
France
and the UK in 2010. Overall
, it can be seen that cars
were the most popular good
in both countries.
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goods
France
, 400 thousand pounds on cars
were spent that year. This
figure was two times more than the number of sold perfume. As for the other categories, the second and third most costly consumption were computers and books, 375 and 300 thousand respectively. The number of cameras was the least allocated ( 150,000).
For the UK , in comparison with France
, the expenditure on cars
was higher by approximately 50 thousand pounds. In addition
, the amount of money spent on the cameras was double, with over 350,000 pounds. The figure spent on perfume reached the lowest point (approximately 140,000).
To sum up
, British people spent more money than in France
on all goods. The highest category for both countries was cars
and the lowest was perfume.Submitted by wsvllnl on
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