The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart provides information on spending on goods consumption in
France
and the UK in 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
cars
were the most popular Use synonyms
good
in both countries.
For Fix the agreement mistake
goods
France
, 400 thousand pounds on Use synonyms
cars
were spent that year. Use synonyms
This
figure was two times more than the number of sold perfume. As for the other categories, the second and third most costly consumption were computers and books, 375 and 300 thousand respectively. The number of cameras was the least allocated ( 150,000).
For the UK , in comparison with Linking Words
France
, the expenditure on Use synonyms
cars
was higher by approximately 50 thousand pounds. Use synonyms
In addition
, the amount of money spent on the cameras was double, with over 350,000 pounds. The figure spent on perfume reached the lowest point (approximately 140,000).
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To sum up
, British people spent more money than in Linking Words
France
on all goods. The highest category for both countries was Use synonyms
cars
and the lowest was perfume.Use synonyms
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