The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. » You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

» You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart compares the spending of 4 different countries on 6 various products.
Overall
, Britain is the largest consumer market in each category
while
Germany is the collectively smallest one.
Moreover
, photographic film is the most popular goods altogether.
To begin
with, British citizens spend about £170
thousand
on graphic movies, about 5.000 more than the French, the second major buyer of
this
item. Customers in Britain
also
allocate a large amount from their budget for toys about £
165.000
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165,000
while
those in France and Italy each spend almost £160
thousand
. The sales of CD and perfumes in Britain is
also
high, at 162 and 160.000 pounds respectively.
Although
less than £160.000 from
this
country goes to the remaining, it is still the number one consumer of them.
By contrast
, Germany is the country with the least expenditure of all on the above-mentioned stuff. The Germans spend no more than £150
thousand
on each kind of goods.
Besides
, France’s spending is higher than Italy’s on CDs and photographic film, but the opposite is true for tennis racquets, perfumes and personal stereos, for which Italy overtakes France as the second largest market. In fact, the payments by the French on those things are the lowest, with around £145, 146 and 147
thousand
respectively.
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