car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how to do you think this statement is? what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

The number of personal
vehicles
is increasing day by day and
due to
that
trend
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there are new issues
such
as
traffic
congestion in main towns. To be honest, I
also
agree with
this
statement and hope to discuss more not only about the matter but
also
about the measures that can be taken by the states.
Firstly
, people seek to have a comfortable lifestyle and they are always struggling to earn more money which is needed to make their dream life pattern a true.
Therefore
, no need to be surprised regarding the increasing number of car owners around the world. But the matter is
rapid
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a rapid
the rapid
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increase in vehicle count
lead
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leads
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to creating other social and environmental problems
such
as
traffic
jams, air pollution, sound pollution, increasing road
traffic
accidents etc.
Research
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found that during covid-19 epidemic
traffic
congessions
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congestion
congestions
, accidents,
environmental
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and environmental
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pollution
have
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reduced dramatically and that means fewer
vehicles
on roads is the main solution for a few current issues throughout the world.
Secondly
, governments are the onus to lead the community in a proper pathway to reduce the usage of private cars by influencing to use
public
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transportation
instead
of it. To do so, states should facilitate comfortable public
vehicles
such
as busses, trains, mono rails etc. Authorities have to introduce strict time schedules and enough
vehicles
for each system and by these people are able to minimize their time wastage. States have to consider the fair for transport facilities and fair should be fair as much as possible. Authorities have the responsibility of announcing the bad effects of using too many
vehicles
and can encourage them to have comfortable rides for a reasonable payment. Once I went to Malaysia and I saw there were different kinds of public transport systems and mono rails were the most common way. Most of the engineers, doctors and other well-paid workers
also
use
this
facility as it is fast, cheap and highly available throughout the day. I talked with a few of them and even though they have personal cars, they were interested in using them as they were able to enjoy the ride and never felt it as a burden.
To sum up
, that's really true,
rapidly
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the rapidly
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increasing number of
vehicles
is the main matter of
traffic
jams and
however
, governments can take measures to reduce them by promoting public
vehicles
.
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