An English-speaking friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Offer to find a place for him / her to live • Give advice about how to find a part-time job • Give information on where he / she can learn your language

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Dear Bob, How're you, my friend? How's the family? We haven't met since we got together

last

year. Hope things are OK at your end. I've just got your letter, and I'm writing to help you with your

accomodation

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accommodation

and work

matter

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. The first thing I want to tell you about is that

this

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great step to come to study

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my city, which has the most reputed universities in the country,

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, I can help you find a suitable house to live

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I have many connections with real estate companies. Let me tell you that you need to find part-time work to assist you with living costs. Fortunately, I've gone through a job

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a sales

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sales man

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at my company, which I think is suitable for you as you are a good negotiator. Another thing I forgot to mention is that learning

Arabic

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the Arabic

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language is

quit

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essential nowadays, so I recommend you to join Cairo

univesity

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university

, which has highly qualified teachers. I hope

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will

serveyou

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serve you

, and if you need any help, don't hesitate to contact me. Please, say hi to your beloved family. Lots of love, Islam

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190 words

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