The money spent by governments on space programmers would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Hi teacher! I want to introduce
this
room. The Name is Computer room. You can see many computers at here. The most, we don’t use it, because each of us use invidual laptop. So, we only in room to printer document: sheet song, home work,…. And me, I often used computer the number 8. I setup software to design graphics, play netflix because I think high performance than laptop, the fast
wifi
, the fast export video. You can see we are 3 printer. Only are 2 still use. In the right the system
wifi
, I setup
wifi
in here:
wifi
, switch, hub, all computer can connected
wifi
by wire network. Above the door,
this
is icon Cross,
this
right is the saint Anfonso, we belong to
this
saint. The left is the our lady of pertuper help.
That is
cabinnet. Every day, at 8pm, all we pick them phone at here. We don’t suft phone in night.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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